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On today’s show,
Chef Chu will make a traditional Chinese meal for his family. He will use
traditional techniques and methods to make it as authentic as possible. He begins by grabbing a fresh catfish,
removing its scales, and opening its belly. He fillets the fish, drenches it in
flour, and fries it. When dealing with the sharp knives he puts his skills to
the test always remembering to be careful and cautious. He uses a
thousand-year-old technique for frying which ensures the crispiness of the fish
without making it too greasy. He then moves on to tackling the squid. Slices
the rubbery mollusk down the middle and then chops it in thin slices. He sets
it aside and moves on to the vegetables. He dices red-hot chili peppers always
remembering to remove the veins and seeds.
Then Chef Chu approaches
the succulent pork belly seared to perfection, just golden brown, but still
juicy and tender. Cuts it consistently ensuring that each bite contains the
right ratio of meat to fat. He then goes back to cutting vegetables, thinly
slicing some white radishes. He cooks the boneless short ribs searing them, and
then cooling them and slicing them.
Next, he goes out
to his backyard in search of a fresh chicken. Chef Chu carefully chooses one,
grasp it harshly by the neck. With this, he prepares a savory meat and
vegetable dish with a tasty sauce served with cabbage. The spotlight comes back
to the fresh chicken, cracking its bones and preparing to steam it. Finally,
the pork-filled dumplings emerge. Using a seasoned ground pork meat and thin
dough, he carefully wraps them and steams them until they are a perfect
consistency not too gummy or thick, just soft and delicious. With this, we
finish this traditional Chinese meal prepared by Chef Chu. Thanks for tuning in
we’ll see you next week on Chef Chu’s Culinary Adventure.
Wonderful! (My only/main critique is to pay attention to punctuation; the last sentences of paragraphs two and three are missing some commas, for example.)
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